高一（2）班 刘津津 指导老师：占婷

    “I’m a big big girl, in the big big word…” Amy and I always sang together but it all changed one day…
    Amy was a girl who liked English songs just like me. We had many similar interests, so we become very good friends and always went to school together. One day , our school held a music competition. Of course, both Amy and I joined it. We formed a group called “Green Apple.” As I predicted, our performance was loved by most of students and we won the championship. The next day, the school gave us a CD as the prize. The CD was so good that we loved it very much. Amy said we should keep it and listen to it in turns. But I disagreed—I thought we should have a game to decide who would get it. We play a game called“ stone, scissors or fabric” and I lost. “ The game is unfair,” I said angrily, “ we should play another round.” Amy heard that, then gave the CD to me, saying nothing. Since then she hasn’t wanted to talk to me and the smiles are gone from her face.
    Later on, I realized that I was selfish when dealing with that situation. Before it happened, I thought Amy and I would be lifelong friends. There was a time we were hand in hand, shoulder to shoulder and arm in arm. Afraid to face my mistake I kept silent. It was difficult to say “ I’m sorry.” Time went by, our friendship was lost.
    Now we are in different senior high schools. I often miss our past and her nice voice. I want to say “sorry” to her , I want to cry…
Amy, I’ m sorry. I’m certain that I have lost a good friend. You, like a mirror, let me find my shortcomings. Sorry, sorry, sorry… Can you hear me? Can you forgive me? I’m waiting for your answer.
编辑点评：
    本文讲述了发生在好友之间的一场矛盾。通过这场矛盾，作者认识到了自身的缺点，懂得了以人为镜，不断反省和完善自我的道理。文章以歌词开头，引人入胜，随着故事情节的展开作者的感情逐渐加强，直至结尾达到高潮。